ASFN: Sun Defense Sparkles Against the Grizzlies

[George O'Brien]

ASFN: Sun Defense Sparkles Against the Grizzlies

 

[Chaplin]

Good article, but just one thing...

Use first names! Any time you name drop in a paragraph, the first instance of the name should be both first and last. In the same paragraph, references to the same person can therefore be last name only. That's a journalistic rule, I believe. It always seems so awkward when reading your stuff.

 

[George O'Brien]

Good article, but just one thing...

Use first names! Any time you name drop in a paragraph, the first instance of the name should be both first and last. In the same paragraph, references to the same person can therefore be last name only. That's a journalistic rule, I believe. It always seems so awkward when reading your stuff.

I sometimes forget I'm not writing on the board. Thank you.