It evolved after straining my eyes reading 6-7-8 line paragraphs stretching all the
way across the page from some other posters. The words began blending together.
My senior citizen tri-focal eyes and glasses had to move on to the next post, and I
was missing some good points being made.
I was a Marketing major once upon a time and I was taught to make it as simple (as
opposed to complex) as possible for people to get my point.
Specifically, write and think like an online or newspaper article. Following the headline
and, if utilized, sub-headline making the most important points.
Make your first paragraph the most important and your final paragraph the second
most important. That is what people will remember the most.
I admit I got carried away, trying to make each post no more than four sentences
long, covering no more than a quarter to a third of the long expanse of the width
of the screen.
And, as you can see, ending at about the same place, as you would expect in an
online article. It is amazing how many paragraphs turn out that way.
Just for kicks, here is what the run-on version looks like.
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It evolved after straining my eyes reading 6-7-8 line paragraphs stretching all the way across the page from some other posters. The words began blending together. My senior citizen tri-focal eyes and glasses would just tend to move on to the next post, and I was missing some good points being made. I was a Marketing major once upon a time and I was taught to make it as simple (as opposed to complex) as possible for people to get my point. Specifically, write and think like an online or newspaper article. Following the headline and, if utilized, sub-headline making the most important points. Make your first paragraph the most important and your final paragraph the second most important. That is what people will remember the most. I admit I got carried away, trying to make each post no more than four sentences long, covering no more than a quarter to a third of the long expanse of the width of the screen. And, as you can see, ending at about the same place, as you would expect in an online article. It is amazing how many paragraphs turn out that way. Just for kicks, here is what the run-on version looks like.
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Granted, that was the exception, but there have been posts like that. I just
couldn't navigate them. My eyes are blurred now from proof-reading it.
Which brings up another point. Not proof-reading posts. Seeing what you
wrote rather than what everyone else is reading.
Especially with spell-check changing what we post. How many times has
Sarver come out Server?