Yeah, but it's very inconsequential to the overall story.
If the plot in Starsea was as good as it was supposed to be within the story of Replay, why wouldn;t he just write Starsea instead?
This is true, but I always hate when a book is really good and then fictional fiction inside of it sucks. Especially in a book that has my total attention like this one does...I don't like being jarred back into reality.